Concrete Eye Poem Take 2

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               A          R         A
         T     milky white         C
     A         film covers               T
  C          lens over pupil             S
    E           focus dulls              T
       Y      stealing your        H
            E       S        I        G

I was playing with the eye concrete poem this morning. I think I’ve found an edit that I like better than just a pupil.

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